After long years of planning and getting the story down, my first ever comic page based off an actualy story of my own design...has been released.
Once more it is my story involving the pyro manical lombax Sin. Here we travel back to the pat in Veldin. I know it says travel back to 2531 =-p As far as I know the planet of lombaxes reaches far beyond our Earth, so technically it doesn't matter . The time it woudl take to get to Veldin by our technological standards would be very far; and a waste of time seeing as how it probably doesn't exist. XD I wish it did though. I dig those lombaxes. ^__^
As this is my first page; I will include my afterthoughts of the creation process of the comic pages. Sort of a memoir on my log on how progress is being made.
AFTERTHOUGHTS:
Well at last after so many years my Immoral Flame comic is up. And boy, for a first page and attempt talk about experimental. I went for a fiery feel of the aftermath of a great war going on the planet Veldin from the past.
That man you see is Sin. He doesn't look like his self yet because we are in the past. This is just a teaser into his past so we know why he is who he is.
It's so dark for the first page. Dark and bright reds dominate everything. For a first attempt at depicting a hellish warzone I think I did ok. Hopefully it's readable enough; but it's a first attempt.
Things will look brighter later on.
BTW: those soldiers...those who played FTOD might take a guess as to what they are.
PS: No spoilers. I got readers who haven't played FOTD yet.
Immoral Flame and Sin is (c) to me shinragod
Ratchet and Clank is (c) to Insomniac
I know I say this a lot, but your coloring truly has come a long way. This is absolutely GORGEOUS. I may not know much on the R&C world, but the dead on red with the black shadowing are two simple colors that really add a lot of depth.
-- "No, dear boy, funny joke around Vlad isnt here today." ~Vlad, Danny Phantom
Thank you .^^ Those are kind words on the coloring. The first page is meant to be warm so it explains all the soft colors. the cooler and normal the next pages get the more defined and less soft. I'm glad I can add depth, I thank you kindly Neoyi. ^^
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Oooh, so instantly we're taken back to Sin's early days? Surprisingly, from first glance my first thought is I know where this is going, but I will not say incase it turned out to be a spoiler, if not, it'll be a good guess .
But wow, I'm already drawn in to what I know will be a powerful and explosive story. I just can't wait to see what becomes of Sin in this story, however I hope it isn't too bad in terms of what'll become of him. My thought so far was "I never thought he would be a fighter of somekind?", very good twist so far might I say .
I love the illuminous (sp?) glow of Veldin there and the flames that are flickering in the last 4 panels. You can really feel the heat and it must be unbearable. I wonder what Sin will do with those commandos?
Good work so far! I really can't wait for the next page already .
This is only the first page and im already as anxious as a nun in a cucumber patch to follow this seires. Makes me wana finally get mine off the ground,despite how crappy it will look.
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"Everybody's looking for a heaven on Earth,a spice a paradice where nobody gets hurt,someone to put the pieces back together again when your daydreams die." -Hideaway by Todd Rundgren
I have to agree with *neoyi, the colors are gorgeous! As well, I love the space background used in the 1st panel, and I'm very interested in finding out just who those dark figures in panels 2-4 are... Really nice job, Chris... For your first story-comic, it's going really well. ^^
At last. The first page is up. And lovin the mood you've set. You've done it very well.
I can see you've attempted the heat wave effect using the blurring tool too.
And so it begins. = ) Hehe this was a good introduction to start off your comic. ^^ Hehe it really gets you excited to see where this is going to lead. = ) Hehe Sin looks really different in the little clip of the far right corner. He looks really demonic.
Really nice page! I can't wait to see read/see what happens next. = D
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"No, dear boy, funny joke around Vlad isnt here today."
~Vlad, Danny Phantom
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There are two things frequently put in Deviantart's Popular and Daily Deviant sections:
Kitties and Titties.
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Wolfcub
*THE JAK & DAXTER NUT*
But wow, I'm already drawn in to what I know will be a powerful and explosive story. I just can't wait to see what becomes of Sin in this story, however I hope it isn't too bad in terms of what'll become of him. My thought so far was "I never thought he would be a fighter of somekind?", very good twist so far might I say
I love the illuminous (sp?) glow of Veldin there and the flames that are flickering in the last 4 panels. You can really feel the heat and it must be unbearable. I wonder what Sin will do with those commandos?
Good work so far! I really can't wait for the next page already
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~Happy Holidays!~
Yea, keep on going is all i can say ^^
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CHUN LI FOR PRESIDENT!!!!
SPINNING BIRD KICK + KIKOUCHENS ALL AROUND!
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"Everybody's looking for a heaven on Earth,a spice a paradice where nobody gets hurt,someone to put the pieces back together again when your daydreams die." -Hideaway by Todd Rundgren
Hope to see the 2nd page up soon!
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Jesus Christ is my Lord and Savior, ツ
I can see you've attempted the heat wave effect using the blurring tool too.
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Really nice page! I can't wait to see read/see what happens next. = D
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"Coughing up feeling just for you
To find something real to hold on to
But there is a hole inside my heart
Where waves of my love come tumbling out. "
"Nobody loves you"- Garbage
I'm gay and not ashamed.
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