Sin and His Henchmen

My dearest girlfriend Jenny is on the verge of releasing her fan comic based ony my story 'Immoral Flame'. She spent a year on it and it I know it is going to be awesome. Gosh how I love her so. So wonderful and talented and very dedicated.

So I drew Sin the Immoral flame alongside some of his super powered allies. As a terrorist Sin has his own soldiers to do a lot of his dirty work. But on the side he does have some super powered and skilled hecnmen; a sort of Lombax 'FoxHound' if you will.

The first hencman (or woman in this case) on the left is Psyler, a blue haired psychic female lombax. But her psychic powers are nothing ordinary. Sin has fire powers. Psyler has ice powers. I did a sort of fire vs. ice thing. On one end of the spectrum it's hot (Sin) and on the other it's cold (Psyler.) the ice she controls is connected with her psyche thus freezing or neutralizing power or enemy fire. Psyler shares Sin's goals; secretly she not only admires him, but she sort of has a thing for him. Sin however is not interested. She is the teams' frontman/ frontwoman.

Continuing down the right of Psyler we have the giant of the group; Barach. Barach is a gold type lombax who coems fro ma tribe of mountain lombaxes on Veldin. He was sort of the black sheep of his tribe; ironic since he was the chief's son. He craved power and more than jsut his surroundings. Not to mention after years of tolerating the opression of his people; he wasn't going to stand idely by like his tribesmen. He joined sin to fight back agaisnt the establishemnt opressing him. Barach is strong and his furry skin is actually kind of his own armor. Normal energy shots can't phase him. On top of that he's got gatling guns that wrap around his arms that he fires at will. Barach is no doubt the team's Juggernaut....bitch. He is the team's enforcer.

In the center on Barach's right is Sin himself. The Immoral flame; the Invisible Terror, the reason I am drawing or writign anything about this. He has a complex history and his full story is the main focus of Immoral Flame. His cause is to restore order to the galaxy by making the lombaxes once again the universe's inherent rulers. (Long story'; you'll see how that transcends once I get this off the ground.) Above all as the terroist leader, he is the threat maker and quite a doer for a leader. He posesses a flame weilding technique called 'Solar Flux' in which he can manipulate fire from his body at will. The flames he uses can cause mass destruction and the fire in both his power and spirit only drives him further to reach his goals. Only Ratchet can stop him; or so it seems. For a more terrifying look into his power; keep on the lookout for 's comic on 'Immoral flame' next week; and then you'll witness the shokcing truth of sin's great power. It is quite unfathomable. He is the team's leader.

On Sin's right is a non lombax henchman; a rare alien known as a doppelganger. His name is Cedric and he is one ofthe very few doppelgangers left. He and his kind were hunted down for their dangerous abilities. They make excellent espionage fighters on account of their abilitiy to copy their enemy's appearance and voice, and even memory at will. Male or female; it does not matter. No race, gender, species or anything is safe fro mthe copying techniques of Cedric. Cedric joins Sin on account that as the last of his kind he wishes to create and rebuild his kidn again once sin's plans succeed. Sin is aware ofthe laboratory where he obtained his solar powers from. Cedric feels in that lab he can recreate his race again too. He acts as the team's spy.

Next to Cedric squatting down and looking more than unsubtle is Zabel; the psychotic and mentally insane lombax. He was once a lab experiment by a research company and was an early prototype for the company's own take on ratchet. They wanted to make a sort of Ratchet for themselves. But it backfired and he escaped with his mind compeltely warped. He became murderous and isntrumental in applying torture. The spinning blade wheel he has on his left arm not only can travel great distnaces like a discus on a chain but it also emits lectricity. Zabel also has probing spikes on his right arm that act like a stabbing claw. These too produce electricity. He gets a pleasure out of torturing his victims and indeed knows how to make them talk when Si nwants information. He is the team's interrogator.

Finally on the far right we have the robot; or Clank of the team; Talmu. He once was a natroious space pirate; leading a team of robots whom he was accompanied with after breaking out of a development plant. Originally he and his bots were designed to be company soldiers. But Talmu was given a chip that gave him a personaltiy and a will. Thus he decided to follow his own path and uses his drones to follow him. He joins Sin on account that he enjoys ghettign even with the companies who use robots for their selfish purposes. Talmu also has a secret agenda. As much as Sin uses hi mand his bots, he is also aware that Sin does not admire or like technology much. Talmu secretly is formulating his own plans, and will only go along for Sin for the time being. He appears to have no legs as he floats; but he can extend those claws of his o nthe side and crawl liek a spider. He is the team's commander of it's robot forces.


That's what i have so far. The rest of m story on it's characters is remainign hidden until further notice, but Jenny's take on Immoral flame should give you all a good idea for what is in store. Catch it next week cause I know I am gonna be totally psyched when I see it. Love ya Jenny.

Sin, Psyler, Barach, Talmu, Cedric and Zabel are (c) to me shinragod (Christopher Keef)